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Spiral FanFic Chapter One by *tempermentalkitty:icontempermentalkitty:





OK!!! Hi there! It's me tempermentalkitty and my very first fanfic I have ever written. I started writing this back in eighth grade which for those of you who don't know was about two and a half years ago. This is why A. this is a partial mary sue. Back then I was still new to fanfics and had no idea what a mary sue was. B. The writing is highly suckish in my opinion. Seriously, even though my english teacher loved it and took it home and let her niece read it. and C. may not be posting anymore depending on how people comment on it. I hope you like it! This was written as a side story going on at the same time has everything else that happened with a few twists cause I'm weird like that.



                                  Spiral Fanfic

"Kiname was never a normal girl! At age three, she has already killed her parents and three brothers!"
"We must have her. I think her abilities would be most useful to us."
"Kiname Kurada...we weill make you ours."
                          Thirteen Years Later
                             Kaname Kurada Age: 16

"Kiname," called Mrs. Dresden," Your next assignment has arrived."

She walked over to where Kiname was resting and handed the girl a folder. Kiname slowly opened it and examined her newest assignment. The pictures of three boys, along with each individual biography, laid inside. She chuckled softly.

"I haven't been a bodyguard in a long while. Eyes Rutherford, Ayumu Narumi, and Kousuke Asazuki....this will be fun," she said with a sly grin on her face.

The doors of the SBAA (Secret Bodyguard and Assassin Association) whisked open and Kiname walked out into the streets of Osaka. Opening up the folder again, she pulled Kousuke's picture out and carefully studied it. His blood red hair and forties styled glasses so reminded her of Sousuke.

"I'm going to have to be very careful with this one. Don't want any memories to escape."

She continued walking, making sure to look as normal as she could. The papers had mentioned that the two boys, Ayumu and Kousuke, were attending a high school nearby called Tsukiyomi Academy. Kousuke being a sophomore, must have been around the age sixteen. And Ayumu, was only but a freshman, so around fourteen. Kiname looked up and walked into a student infested school yard. They weren't kidding when they said it was nearby. She walked towards the student help office to register just as something caught her attention out of the corner of her eye. Her eyes followed Ayumu as he walked to the ninth grade building heading for class. His dark brown hair made it look as if he had stuck his fingers into a light socket. Kiname took a sharp turn and began following the young boy, trying to remain unnoticeable.

Ayumu stopped walking and sighed," You can come out and now and stop slinking around. It wasn't hard to tell that you were following me."

"Well no duh," she though," I wasn't trying."

Kiname walked up behind him and wrapped her arms around his shoulders," well well well...I never expected you to be this cute."

He turned around quickly, knocking her away. She gazed into his dark blue
eyes which seemed so lifeless and hurt.

"Ayumu Narumi, age fourteen...that is you correct?"

He looked at her confused," That's right. And who might you be?"

She reached into her pocket and pulled out a business card. Slowly, she bowed and announced, " My name is Kiname Kurada, and I am at your service."

He stared at her in disbelief. Her long auburn hair swayed in the wind and her nearly flawless, petite body left his mind in wonder. She stood up once again and her eyes, her duel coloured eyes that were anything but ordinary, met his. The left eye a deep, dark emerald green and the right eye a dark, stormy blue.

"Ayumu Narumi, on behalf of the SBAA, I have been instructed to protect you and two others with my life until all threats have been eliminated."

Ayumu flipped the card over and looked it over. Surely enough, it stated nearly everything that she had just proclaimed.

"Okay then...how can I be so sure that I can trust you?" he asked cautiously.

She sighed and reached into her bag. From it, she withdrew a blue watch," always keep this on you. Whenever you are in trouble, press the red button. It will activate a signal and it will alert me via my watch that you are in need of my services."

Kiname turned around and began to walk away from the boy to return to what she had previously been doing. Ayumu quickly took hold of her hand and she stopped in her tracks.

"If you are supposed to help me, can you find any information about my brother, Kiyotaka Narumi?"

She looked into his now warm and friendly eyes and replied," I will do as I can, but for now, I must be off to locate the other two clients."

Kiname blew Ayumu a kiss as she sprinted away towards the office building, leaving behind a very confused Narumi.
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Author's Comments

OK!!! Hi there! It's me tempermentalkitty and my very first fanfic I have ever written. I started writing this back in eighth grade which for those of you who don't know was about two and a half years ago. This is why A. this is a partial mary sue. Back then I was still new to fanfics and had no idea what a mary sue was. B. The writing is highly suckish in my opinion. Seriously, even though my english teacher loved it and took it home and let her niece read it. and C. may not be posting anymore depending on how people comment on it. I hope you like it! This was written as a side story going on at the same time has everything else that happened with a few twists cause I'm weird like that.

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:iconemil93:
I love it Kitty! You really shouldn't me so modest. You're an excellent writer. You should listen to your english teacher.

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:iconredwingblackbird:
This is excellent writing, Kitty. Post more!!!!!

*growls* stay away from my Ayumu-muffin...

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I WILL drive the speed limit, thank you. I don't want to spend the holidays DEAD.
:icontempermentalkitty:
YOUR AYUMU MUFFIN! *glares*

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~Non mihi, non tibi, sed nobis~
~Not for me, not for you, but for us~

I'm Rio Takeuchi in ~Cartoon-Obsessions
I'm Tish Katsufrakus in ~The-Disney-Directory
:iconredwingblackbird:
Geez, just kidding. EYES is mine, though. *leashes protectively*

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I WILL drive the speed limit, thank you. I don't want to spend the holidays DEAD.
:icontempermentalkitty:
That's fine ^^ I may end up working you into the story if I feel like adding a new character. I will however put up profiles on each fanmade character

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~Non mihi, non tibi, sed nobis~
~Not for me, not for you, but for us~

I'm Rio Takeuchi in ~Cartoon-Obsessions
I'm Tish Katsufrakus in ~The-Disney-Directory
:iconredwingblackbird:
That'd be neat, actually. Only if you feel like it, though.

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I WILL drive the speed limit, thank you. I don't want to spend the holidays DEAD.

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